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Boys Who Smoke: Chapter 4

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Zayn was frozen on his knees in his room, he was bawling his eyes out, but he let the tears fall. He wanted them to fall, maybe if they did he would let out all of the hurt that Louis had just given him. He had loved Louis for a YEAR, and he just told him that he could never love him because Zayn smokes. Zayn stood up and dried hos eyes, but his eyes were still pretty red and puffy, but he accepted it and then he went down the stairs to meet the boys. It was their free week, they had no interveiws, concerts or anything ALL week. And trust me, they needed it. "So, what I don't understand is why Louis came bumbarding into my room and woke me up at an UNGODLY hour when we don't have to work ALL WEEK!" Niall exclaimed, softly shoving Louis's shoulder, but Louis had a frown still from having to break Zayn's heart. "Louis mate, what is the matter?"  Liam asked, putting his hand on his shoulder, and that broke Zayn's heart as he watched them from the staircase, before coming down to sit at the kitchen table, as far away from Louis as he could without breaking his own heart. Liam chuckled a little at Niall's comment before turning his head to look at Zayn with his head burrowed deeply in his arms.  "Zayn? What's wrong mate?" Liam asked. Louis put his head down in shame, because he was aware that Zayn was like this, because of him. Zayn didn't answer, he only got up from the chair with wet eyes and escaped to the roof of the building by climbing numerous stairs to the top. Zayn stood there and looked over the edge, the thought of just jumping off crossed his mind, Louis didn't love him, he wanted to so bad. But he stopped himself, he then pulled out the pack of cigarettes and the blue lighter out of his left and right pocket and frowned at them. "You ruined my life, my everything. Louis will never love me because of YOU." Zayn yelled at the pack of cigarettes and lighter in the palm of his right hand as he threw them off the edge, not caring if they hit soeone or something. He then let himself fall back and sir on the roof. "I can quit. I WILL quit, for Louis. He will love me then. Yeah, I will quit and Louis will love me!" Zayn exclaimed, wearing a smile for once as he ran down the stairs back into the house to tell the boys his new idea.
Chapter of my new Zouis Talik fanfiction, Boys Who Smoke <3
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redlily55's avatar
Your an amazayn writer I love these pieces! ZOUIS!!! Poor zaynie.... :( I have a sinking feeling inside my stomach when zayn is sad :( Really well written tho :)